Zachary German is posting bits of a novel called Eat When You Feel Sadon his blog. it's very good. you should read it. it's written in the 'simple-declarative-non-cliched-sentence' style, similar to Eeeee Eee Eeee by Tao Lin and Chilly Scenes of Winter by Ann Beattie. i like this style a lot. i tried to do it a bit in the 'supermarket nightmare' novel as a kind of 'writing exersise'. now i think i am 'infected' by this style; if i try and write a language-cliche or something, i end up wanting to stab myself in the eyes afterwards with a pair of scissors.